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media type="custom" key="11387342"    ** WALT: ** write a narrative

** SUCCESS CRITERIA: ** our narrative will ...

• demonstrate correct structure (orientation, complication, series of events, resolution) • use a variety of descriptive language for effect • include dialogue for added effect • maintain correct tense throughout ( third person) • demonstrate correct use of writing conventions (spelling, grammar, punctuation etc)  media type="youtube" key="Cq3Xc7HhBl4" height="315" width="420"      <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #1e1eb3; display: block; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">__**TASK:**__ write an information report on an animal of your choice

__<span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #1e1eb3; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif;">** SUCCESS CRITERIA: ** __ <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #1e1eb3; display: block; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">• report is organised in correct format (classification, description, summarising comment) <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #1e1eb3; display: block; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">• report includes technical vocabulary unique to subject matter <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #1e1eb3; display: block; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">• report includes a variety of action verbs (climb, eat, erupt) <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #1e1eb3; display: block; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">• report is written in timeless present tense (are, exist, grow)



<span style="background-color: #ff000d; color: #00b91d; display: block; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 140%; text-align: left;">__Habitat.__

<span style="background-color: #0011ff; color: #00b91d; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 140%;">The Red Panda lives in the rainy forest like the giant pandas in the mountains near nepal and myanmar. they spend most of there lives in trees. they are nocturnal so they only move around at night. Red Pandas are very shy and will never play with another animal.

<span style="background-color: #ff000d; color: #00b91d; display: block; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 140%; text-align: left;">__Eating habits.__

<span style="background-color: #0011ff; color: #00b91d; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 140%;">Red Pandas love eating bamboo in trees but they all so like other foods like bugs, insects, roots and eggs. Red Pandas have a small stomach and can only eat a limit of food.

<span style="background-color: #ff0c00; color: #00b91d; display: block; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 140%; text-align: left;">__Description.__

<span style="background-color: #0011ff; color: #00b91d; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 140%;">The Red Panda is reddish brown and its fur is very bush. Its face is a white with whiskers coming out of its snout. The Red Pandas grow around to 46 centimeters long 18 inches. Red Pandas are very shy and will only play with another animal if it knows it.

<span style="background-color: #ff0006; color: #00b91d; display: block; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 140%; text-align: left;">__Behavior.__

<span style="background-color: #0011ff; color: #00b91d; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 140%;">The Red panda loves to have fun climbing trees and rolling around in leafs. The Red Panda will always protect its babies by growling or showing its teeth. Red Pandas are very protective no matter what the reason is.

<span style="background-color: #ff000f; color: #00b907; display: block; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 140%; text-align: left;">__Summarizing statement.__

<span style="background-color: #0011ff; color: #00b91d; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 140%;">The Red Panda is a very fluffy and cute animal loved my lots of people.

<span style="background-color: #ff0006; color: #00b91d; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 140%;">BY Jonathan Farrow.




 * WALT: ** understand the features of advertisements and what makes an effective advertisement.


 * SUCCESS CRITERIA: ** our poster advertisement will ...

• text will support the image • no negative space on poster • appropriate sized fonts and colour used • all relevant details included in advertisement • poster is appealing to the eye and makers me want to buy the product



**TASK:** to create a poster advertising a product our group has created
 * WALT: ** write an informal letter.


 * SUCCESS CRITERIA: ** our informal letter will ...

• demonstrate correct format and structure • include at least 3 facts about various locations • use an appropriate introduction and conclusion • demonstrate correct use of writing conventions (spelling, grammar, punctuation etc)

• include address of recipient • include stamp relevant to your chosen country • include an appropriate image that represents a tourist attraction


 * TASK: To create a post card. **

If you click the link it will show my post card


** WALT: ** understand how a "slice of life" recount is shaped and how language features are used.

** SUCCESS CRITERIA: ** our "slice of life recount" will ...

• demonstrate correct format • have all events written in chronological order • use a variety of descriptive language for effect • maintain present tense throughout • demonstrate correct use of writing conventions (spelling, grammar, punctuation etc)

**TASK:** to write a "slice of life" recount based on a shared experience, eg; Motu Moana trip.

<span style="background-color: #000000; color: #001eff; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 170%;">My Motu Moana recount

<span style="background-color: #000000; color: #ff0000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 120%;">As I walk to the abseiling wall I realize it is taller than I thought. As I'm putting on my harness one of the instructors says it might hurt a little going down but as I always do,I took no notice. I walk up the stairs wondering when they would end, I finally get to the top and look over the edge and see everyone cheering for me, as I gulp I see Mathew so scared he could almost wet his pants.

<span style="background-color: #000000; color: #ff0000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 120%;">I am the first one to be hooked on the giant wall. The instructor tells me to walk back so I do but very cautiously. I finally get onto the 45 degree bit and it's really starting to hurt around my waist. Now I know why they tell us it may hurt because it really does. As I take really tiny steps the instructor tells me to loosen the rope faster and that will make me go faster down and get it ove and done with.

<span style="background-color: #000000; color: #ff0000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 120%;">As I reach the most easiest bit, the pain just kept coming. I just feel like yelling as loud as I can because it hurt so much. Everyone at the bottom all went quiet. I wonder what was going on? When I look down a big gush of wind nearly sweeps me off my feet. I carry on down the scary wall of Motu Moana, still very cold and wanting to get down.

<span style="background-color: #000000; color: #ff0000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 120%;">When I reach the green planks of wood I know I'm nearly at the bottom. The instructor yells at me start jumping so I start jumping on the green planks of wood. As I get closer to the bottom it gets more slippery and I keep loosing my feet placement. I keep bouncing off the wall, when I gaze down I see one of the parents heads ready to catch me when i hit the ground. I have finally finished and have completed the giant abseiling wall at Motu Moana!

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